They
shoot the white girl first. Her
dainty body collapsed onto the classroom floor. Everyone suddenly stood dead
silent. Enough tension hung in the air that gravity seemed to put twice as much
pressure on all of the glassy-eyed teenagers’ shoulders. Time seemed to slow,
then after an eternity, Tina’s classmates ran away from the man covered in
black. Tina stayed statuesque, paralyzed and shocked. To her, it looked as if
everyone was trying to run under water. When she adjusted her gaze past the
chaotic bodies rushing past her, she saw eyes that were behind an all-black
face mask. They did not strike her as the eyes of a killer. They were wise and
deep blue; Tina swore she saw a hint of sorrow seeping from his most expressive
feature. A glimmer of a tear shined in the bright light that was radiating down
onto him from above. He then lifted the gun. She saw straight down the barrel,
then she was immediately struck back into reality. “This is actually happening.”
Her brain kept repeating the simple yet powerful phrase in her mind. As if by
instinct, Tina crumpled down to her feet right as the trigger of the gun was
pulled. She locked her body into a fetal position, with her hands thrown
defensively over her head. After a few more shots rang out and more horrific
shrieks escaped the mouths of others, the man in the black fell. Tina forced
herself to look up. Her vision was horribly blurred and distorted from her
tears, but she could still make out the red. The deep scarlet color grew on the
floor around the man’s head. Then she saw the official mark of death laying in
the middle of his forehead. Tina looked backward at her teacher, who white
knuckles were shaking while grasping her own gun. Tina, without thinking,
screamed “NO! He wasn’t… he didn’t… he…” then her voice broke off and she
started bawling uncontrollably. She knew she noticed something, almost like
innocence, in his eyes. Then when her thoughts started clearing up, she
realized that no one would believe her. No one else saw what she saw, or felt
what she felt.
Their
plan was working perfectly. The malicious duo was more intelligent than
expected from a group of men who didn’t even go to college. They shared a
mutual hatred of teenagers, even though one of them was barely older than
eighteen himself. The young counterpart’s accomplice in these crimes was a
stubborn old man. Their mixture of a psychotic nature and smarts, led to an
enormous amount of blood on their hands. Together they invested the time and
money into the making of a specialized brain chip. Once implanted into an
innocent and unknowing victim, their body would do whatever the two men leisurely
typed on their high-tech keyboards. The most sinister part of their brain chip,
was that it could not block the subjects’ thoughts, so they were conscious and
doomed to watch the rest of their life play out in front of their eyes. They
had no control over their body at all, but they felt everything that happened
to them. All of the unlucky chosen subjects were eventually killed or thrown
into prison, due to actions that they did not commit of their own accord. Yet,
no one would ever be smart enough to figure out the two devilish men’s role in
all of the murders and robberies. The thought of being able to dodge such a
bullet filled the two men with joy and a feeling of success so strong, that
they almost believed they were invincible or even immortal. The elderly man had
come up with the whole plan many years ago, but just recently met a young man
willing to help him achieve his evil hopes and dreams. The wrinkled scumbag
crawls into bed the same night that he and his partner had succeeded their
first large-scale school shooting. He was very satisfied with himself. He even
smiled in his sleep. The old man was dreaming about the lions.
the amount of small detailed referred to in this is amazing. for a while, I actually forgot I was reading a story, and thought this was something that was actually happening. I felt like I could connect to the feeling in this, and I really enjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeleteI could totally see this as the basis for a futuristic, dystopian novel and/or film. The scene you paint at the end of this evil person falling into a peaceful sleep makes the story especially creepy and haunting, knowing that there are people out there who really have no conscience.
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